Task 10 -Staging

In this task we had to create a storyboard panel based off a children nursery rhyme. I chose Incy wincy spider as i felt like i would be able to pull some cool aesthetics out of it.

What went well?
The story line is concise, with the nursery rhyme, the only thing i altered slightly, to fit a darker aesthetic was the spider dying at the end instead of drying out and going to live on another day.
you can tell what i going on just by looking at it  (i asked multiple people)
i used a limited colour pallet, only using colour to emphasis a certain action or feeling.

What could be improved?
the stage directing could be a bit clearer.
i could've used some more specialized words to better indicate what i wanted to happen.