Charicter and Narrative Week 7

This week we had the first of our weekly presentations. We showed a rough version of the anamatic along with everything that we have done for pre production thus far.

I was ill on this particular day, Therefore i wasn't able to personal present to the rest of the class. However, my team reported the feedback to me and afterwards Dotty came and spoke to us personally about the things we needed to change.

• The feedback front he rest of the class and Dotty was the following;
• The animatic breaks the 180 rule a lot. 
• In the beginning the clouds pull apart too quickly
• timing in general needs to be adjusted
• the scene where she is in the cave is too comical and needs to be reconsidered. 
• the character design was good, although it needs colouring asap and the face needs to be more detailed.  
• The after credits scene might not fit with the context of the rest of the animation

In addition to this, I have had to create more assets due to my poor organization skills. I should have made a list of everything we needed for each scene before we went into production. However, I am staying back every night this week and next so hopefully I will be able to catch up in a timely manner.